Thursday, March 11, 2010

School assignment

I am amazed, humbled and yet proud of Natalie. She had an optional writing assignment for Lutheran Schools week based on 1 Corinthians 12:5. The topic was "In His Service". This is what she came up with. I love her very much and she's reading this post as I type. :)



She started with this outline that she developed herself. This was a huge surprise to us, and she layed it out better than I used to for even my college papers. :)





This was the initial sentences she created based off of her outline.



Here is the final product after a re-write. She corrected some of her own spelling mistakes. I did not proofread at all, instead focusing on the importance of this coming from her heart rather than the technical perfections.





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