She started with this outline that she developed herself. This was a huge surprise to us, and she layed it out better than I used to for even my college papers. :)

This was the initial sentences she created based off of her outline.
Here is the final product after a re-write. She corrected some of her own spelling mistakes. I did not proofread at all, instead focusing on the importance of this coming from her heart rather than the technical perfections.


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